Goldilocks and the three bears
The story is about a little girl who walks in the woods and saw a house and went to the house. When she came to the house so she looked through the window and she saw food on the table so she went in to the house. She try averybodys food and the baby bears food was the best food so she eat up all the food and then she go upstairs. She goes into a room and there was three beds and she choose the baby bears bed and then she fall a sleep. And then the three bears came home and went upstairs and saw that it was a little girl that sleeps in the baby bears bed. Goldilock woke up and saw three bears and she screamd and run home as fast as she could and she never go back to the woods again.
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---who walked---
--she tried everybody's food---she ate---she went upstairs---
She went ---there were three beds---she chose the baby bear's bed---she fell asleep.
---that slept---she screamed and ran---never went---